Editing Talk:Lilly's route/@comment-75.32.38.41-20130828001630/@comment-99.227.104.228-20140811065421

I agree, this isn't one of my favourite routes. First, having the good ending be a continuation from the neutral ending doesn't make the good ending feel justified. The "neutral" ending felt like a strong end, but the "good" ending wouldn't make everyone involved feel "good."

imo, the good ending should have branched off into another plot where they were not so commited in producing the neutral ending.

+ there is more commitment in persons actions in the neutral ending rather than the good ending. I kinda want to say something a little cool to link how you would assume the level of whole-hearted commitment is there towards the good ending

+ I think I couldn't come to fall for this type of character, she seems reserved, even when she is "natural" so I would feel like i'm always getting a choreographed response rather than a truthful response.