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~~~~{{Infobox ~~transcripts~~|~~content~~=*[[Hisao Nakai]]

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|image=Shanghai Afternoon.png

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|characters=*[[Hisao Nakai]]

*[[Misha]]

*[[Shizune Hakamichi]]

*[[Yuuko Shirakawa]]

|next = [[A Private Lunch/Transcript]]|~~|name~~ = Detour Ahead

|next = [[A Private Lunch/Transcript|A Private Lunch]]

|prev = [[~~Meet Cute~~/Transcript]]}}~~~~

|title = Detour Ahead

|prev = [[Short Sharp Shock/Transcript|Short Sharp Shock]]}}

NARRATOR: "Watching her walk in front of me, I notice that she walks very quickly, taking long, heavy, determined strides. Maybe if we were traveling through a snowstorm it would make sense to walk like that, but it's a perfectly clear day. Anyway, it's making me feel exhausted just watching her.

NARRATOR: "We arrive at the teahouse in what Misha says is “record time,” likely because of Shizune's blazing pace. I feel a little let down seeing that it's not a huge feudal-era building with mats on the floor and women in kimonos pouring the tea. It actually is more like a café, as I thought. Not that it's a bad thing. It looks very nice. As soon as I walk through the doors, someone zooms in front of us, as if they had been lying in wait the entire time."

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HISAO: "You don't have to be so formal, we all know each other."

NARRATOR: "It's also pretty empty today, so she can afford to take it easy. I was hoping she would stop looking so nervous, but my words have the opposite effect.

YUUKO: "No... I'm a waitress, this is my job, I have to... do it properly."

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YUUKO: "I'm sorry! I'm really, really sorry, I forgot to take your order... I'm... not attentive to customers, that's not right... I'm sorry... If there is anything I can do to make up for it, please tell me..."

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SHIZUNE: "..."

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HISAO: "Yeah, she's right. I'll have some coffee, and... a sandwich, if you have one. Whichever sandwich you think is the best tasting one here, because Shizune is paying for my meal."

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NARRATOR: "Shizune frowns and gives me alternating looks of surprise, indignation, and bemusement, unable to decide between the three."

SHIZUNE: "..."

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MISHA: "Hicchan, just how much money do you have in your wallet? It can't be that little, right?, right? We should split the cost three ways, to make it fair~! Yeah, I won't accept anything else~!"

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HISAO: "Why me?"

MISHA: "Hahaha~! Shicchan thinks that if the art teacher sees us, he will say ~~HISAO:~~ , and she doesn't like him!"

MISHA: "Hahaha~! Shicchan thinks that if the art teacher sees us, he will say hi, and she doesn't like him!"

HISAO: "Ignore him."

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NARRATOR: "She holds out a piece of paper for me to take. I'm sure this list was made by Shizune. It's handwritten, but each letter is perfectly formed and uniform, as if it were typed. Not just that, but it's exhaustively detailed, complete with numbers, bullet points, and even little checkboxes. What it boils down to is that she wants paint, paintbrushes, posterboard, and an easel. Just different types and specific numbers of each. I wonder how I'm going to carry all of this stuff down the stairs without breaking my neck."

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-<p style="font-weight:normal;">{{Infobox transcripts|content=*[[Hisao Nakai]]
+{{Infobox transcript
+|image=Shanghai Afternoon.png
+|act=1
+|characters=*[[Hisao Nakai]]
 *[[Misha]]
 *[[Shizune Hakamichi]]
 *[[Yuuko Shirakawa]]
-|next = [[A Private Lunch/Transcript]]||name = Detour Ahead
+|next = [[A Private Lunch/Transcript|A Private Lunch]]
-|prev = [[Meet Cute/Transcript]]}}</p>
+|title = Detour Ahead
+|prev = [[Short Sharp Shock/Transcript|Short Sharp Shock]]}}
 NARRATOR: "Watching her walk in front of me, I notice that she walks very quickly, taking long, heavy, determined strides. Maybe if we were traveling through a snowstorm it would make sense to walk like that, but it's a perfectly clear day. Anyway, it's making me feel exhausted just watching her.
 NARRATOR: "We arrive at the teahouse in what Misha says is “record time,” likely because of Shizune's blazing pace. I feel a little let down seeing that it's not a huge feudal-era building with mats on the floor and women in kimonos pouring the tea. It actually is more like a café, as I thought. Not that it's a bad thing. It looks very nice. As soon as I walk through the doors, someone zooms in front of us, as if they had been lying in wait the entire time."
@@ Line 30: / Line 34: @@
 HISAO: "You don't have to be so formal, we all know each other."
 NARRATOR: "It's also pretty empty today, so she can afford to take it easy. I was hoping she would stop looking so nervous, but my words have the opposite effect.
 YUUKO: "No... I'm a waitress, this is my job, I have to... do it properly."
@@ Line 45: / Line 49: @@
 YUUKO: "I'm sorry! I'm really, really sorry, I forgot to take your order... I'm... not attentive to customers, that's not right... I'm sorry... If there is anything I can do to make up for it, please tell me..."
+<p style="text-align:center;">[[File:shizu_shanghai.jpg|700px]]</p>
 SHIZUNE: "..."
@@ Line 53: / Line 59: @@
 HISAO: "Yeah, she's right. I'll have some coffee, and... a sandwich, if you have one. Whichever sandwich you think is the best tasting one here, because Shizune is paying for my meal."
+<p style="text-align:center;">[[File:shizu_shanghai_borednormal|700px]]</p>
 NARRATOR: "Shizune frowns and gives me alternating looks of surprise, indignation, and bemusement, unable to decide between the three."
 SHIZUNE: "..."
+<p style="text-align:center;">[[File:shizu_shanghai_boredlaugh|700px]]</p>
 MISHA: "Hicchan, just how much money do you have in your wallet? It can't be that little, right?, right? We should split the cost three ways, to make it fair~! Yeah, I won't accept anything else~!"
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 HISAO: "Why me?"
-MISHA: "Hahaha~! Shicchan thinks that if the art teacher sees us, he will say HISAO: , and she doesn't like him!"
+MISHA: "Hahaha~! Shicchan thinks that if the art teacher sees us, he will say hi, and she doesn't like him!"
 HISAO: "Ignore him."
@@ Line 366: / Line 376: @@
 NARRATOR: "She holds out a piece of paper for me to take. I'm sure this list was made by Shizune. It's handwritten, but each letter is perfectly formed and uniform, as if it were typed. Not just that, but it's exhaustively detailed, complete with numbers, bullet points, and even little checkboxes. What it boils down to is that she wants paint, paintbrushes, posterboard, and an easel. Just different types and specific numbers of each. I wonder how I'm going to carry all of this stuff down the stairs without breaking my neck."
-<p align="center">'''[Next Scene: [[A Private Lunch/Transcript|A Private Lunch]]]'''</p>
+<p style="text-align: center;">'''Next Scene: [[A Private Lunch/Transcript|A Private Lunch]]'''</p>
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 [[Category:Act 1 Transcripts]]
+[[Category:Misha Scenes]]
+[[Category:Shizune Scenes]]
+[[Category:Yuuko Scenes]]
+[[Category:Wednesday]]
+[[Category:Hisao Scenes]]
+[[Category:Scenes]]
+[[Category:Act 1 - Life Expectancy]]