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HISAO: "Anybody ho--"

NARRATOR: "Something catches my eye and I stop mid-sentence. Sitting on a desk is a short-haired girl; curiously wearing a boy's uniform, with a fork between her toes, a morsel of food stuck firmly on the end. This odd way of dining seems to be caused by her apparent lack of hands, but her presence here is what takes me aback even more. How did I miss her before? She's sitting in a corner very still, but I still somehow took her as a part of the furnishing or a statue at first glance. I'm not being too observant today, as a whole."

NARRATOR: "Something catches my eye and I stop mid-sentence."

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NARRATOR: "Sitting on a desk is a short-haired girl; curiously wearing a boy's uniform, with a fork between her toes, a morsel of food stuck firmly on the end. This odd way of dining seems to be caused by her apparent lack of hands, but her presence here is what takes me aback even more. How did I miss her before? She's sitting in a corner very still, but I still somehow took her as a part of the furnishing or a statue at first glance. I'm not being too observant today, as a whole."

NARRATOR: "The girl seems to be frozen in place, staring at me with her huge eyes like a rabbit in headlights. She's staring at me, her mouth wide open, ready to accept the fork. I'm staring at her, my mouth wide open, suddenly remembering I didn't finish my sentence and trying to think if I should. This weird stalemate keeps us both stunned into silence, punctuated only by the wall clock ticking rhythmically."

~~RIN~~: "Hello."

STRANGE GIRL: "Hello."

NARRATOR: "The girl stuffs the forkful in her mouth, and is now staring at me expectantly while chewing. This is a bit awkward."

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HISAO: "Umm... hello. I was told to pick up some supplies from here. For some festival stalls I think. I didn't think there would be someone here."

~~RIN~~: "There isn't. That's why I came here, too."

STRANGE GIRL: "There isn't. That's why I came here, too."

NARRATOR: "She picks up another forkful."

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NARRATOR: "She raises her eyebrows as if she was suspecting my observation was false."

~~RIN~~: "You are pretty observant. I guess it does. But who are you?"

STRANGE GIRL: "You are pretty observant. I guess it does. But who are you?"

NARRATOR: "This girl is pretty straightforward, isn't she?"

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HISAO: "I'm Nakai, Hisao Nakai. I just transferred in on Monday."

~~RIN~~: "I'm Rin. Tezuka Rin. Rin Tezuka. I won't shake hands with you, but at least we know who we are now. That's very nice."

STRANGE GIRL: "I'm Rin. Tezuka Rin. Rin Tezuka. I won't shake hands with you, but at least we know who we are now. That's very nice."

NARRATOR: "Her deadpan manner of talking makes it hard to determine whether she's joking about shaking hands or not. It kinda bothers me, joking about these matters doesn't feel appropriate at all. While I'm trying to figure what's appropriate and whether this girl is, she seems to have lost interest in me and is now gazing yearningly back at her food."

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[[Category:Act 1 Transcripts]]

[[Category:Rin Scenes]]

[[Category:Wednesday]]

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 HISAO: "Anybody ho--"
-NARRATOR: "Something catches my eye and I stop mid-sentence. Sitting on a desk is a short-haired girl; curiously wearing a boy's uniform, with a fork between her toes, a morsel of food stuck firmly on the end. This odd way of dining seems to be caused by her apparent lack of hands, but her presence here is what takes me aback even more. How did I miss her before? She's sitting in a corner very still, but I still somehow took her as a part of the furnishing or a statue at first glance. I'm not being too observant today, as a whole."
+NARRATOR: "Something catches my eye and I stop mid-sentence."
+<p style="text-align:center;">[[File:rin_eating.jpg|700px]]</p>
+NARRATOR: "Sitting on a desk is a short-haired girl; curiously wearing a boy's uniform, with a fork between her toes, a morsel of food stuck firmly on the end. This odd way of dining seems to be caused by her apparent lack of hands, but her presence here is what takes me aback even more. How did I miss her before? She's sitting in a corner very still, but I still somehow took her as a part of the furnishing or a statue at first glance. I'm not being too observant today, as a whole."
 NARRATOR: "The girl seems to be frozen in place, staring at me with her huge eyes like a rabbit in headlights. She's staring at me, her mouth wide open, ready to accept the fork. I'm staring at her, my mouth wide open, suddenly remembering I didn't finish my sentence and trying to think if I should. This weird stalemate keeps us both stunned into silence, punctuated only by the wall clock ticking rhythmically."
-RIN: "Hello."
+STRANGE GIRL: "Hello."
 NARRATOR: "The girl stuffs the forkful in her mouth, and is now staring at me expectantly while chewing. This is a bit awkward."
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 HISAO: "Umm... hello. I was told to pick up some supplies from here. For some festival stalls I think. I didn't think there would be someone here."
-RIN: "There isn't. That's why I came here, too."
+STRANGE GIRL: "There isn't. That's why I came here, too."
 NARRATOR: "She picks up another forkful."
@@ Line 32: / Line 37: @@
 NARRATOR: "She raises her eyebrows as if she was suspecting my observation was false."
-RIN: "You are pretty observant. I guess it does. But who are you?"
+STRANGE GIRL: "You are pretty observant. I guess it does. But who are you?"
 NARRATOR: "This girl is pretty straightforward, isn't she?"
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 HISAO: "I'm Nakai, Hisao Nakai. I just transferred in on Monday."
-RIN: "I'm Rin. Tezuka Rin. Rin Tezuka. I won't shake hands with you, but at least we know who we are now. That's very nice."
+STRANGE GIRL: "I'm Rin. Tezuka Rin. Rin Tezuka. I won't shake hands with you, but at least we know who we are now. That's very nice."
 NARRATOR: "Her deadpan manner of talking makes it hard to determine whether she's joking about shaking hands or not. It kinda bothers me, joking about these matters doesn't feel appropriate at all. While I'm trying to figure what's appropriate and whether this girl is, she seems to have lost interest in me and is now gazing yearningly back at her food."
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 [[Category:Transcripts]]
 [[Category:Act 1 Transcripts]]
+[[Category:Rin Scenes]]
+[[Category:Wednesday]]
+[[Category:Hisao Scenes]]
+[[Category:Scenes]]
+[[Category:Act 1 - Life Expectancy]]