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NARRATOR: "Part of me is dying to see Hanako. The last time I saw her she looked like death walking, and these last few hours have torn me apart just thinking about that. We quietly get up and file out of Lilly's room. Hanako's room is next door in the same hallway. Knocking lightly gets us no response, but the door proves to be unlocked. Lilly pauses for a moment as the handle unexpectedly moves under her hand, before opening the door."

NARRATOR: "Hanako's room is startlingly bare and monotone. There are no decorations on the plain white walls, a plain dark blue blanket, and only a few books, papers, and purely utilitarian items on the shelves. Even her bedsheets are monochrome. The entire room feels as subdued as Hanako's character. Hanako herself is laying curled up on her bed. She may not be crying now, but her eyes are closed tightly to stop herself, and the tracks left by her tears still sit on her reddened cheeks.I quietly walk in and set her bag down on her desk, afraid of startling her too much."

NARRATOR: "Hanako's room is startlingly bare and monotone. There are no decorations on the plain white walls, a plain dark blue blanket, and only a few books, papers, and purely utilitarian items on the shelves. Even her bedsheets are monochrome."

[[File:~~Hanako in her bed~~.~~png~~|700px]]

[[File:hanako_cry_closed.jpg|700px]]

NARRATOR: "The entire room feels as subdued as Hanako's character. Hanako herself is laying curled up on her bed. She may not be crying now, but her eyes are closed tightly to stop herself, and the tracks left by her tears still sit on her reddened cheeks.I quietly walk in and set her bag down on her desk, afraid of startling her too much."

LILLY: "Hello, Hanako. Hisao told me about what happened today... are you all right?"

[[File:hanako_cry_away.jpg|700px]]

NARRATOR: "Hanako's eyes open, though only a little."

HANAKO: "I... I'm okay..."

[[File:hanako_cry_open.jpg|700px]]

NARRATOR: "She tilts her head slightly to look at me, noticing my grimacing before I can hide it."

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LILLY: "I'm the one who should be sorry, Hanako."

[[File:hanako_cry_away.jpg|700px]]

NARRATOR: "Hanako's eyes open to peer at Lilly. She looks at Lilly for some time, taking in her face with those dark, analytical eyes of hers. Lilly must have made the right impression on her, as Hanako recovers enough to prop herself up on the bed and shift to sitting on its side. Hanako worries about many things, but troubling others is foremost among them. Hearing Hanako's shuffling, Lilly moves forward and feels out the side of the bed, eventually taking a seat beside her and taking Hanako's left hand in both of hers. The feeling of me being out of place when the two are together has lessened in the time that we've known each other, but it's still occasionally very much there. This is one of those times, I think."

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[[Category:Act 3 - Castling Transcripts]]

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 NARRATOR: "Part of me is dying to see Hanako. The last time I saw her she looked like death walking, and these last few hours have torn me apart just thinking about that. We quietly get up and file out of Lilly's room. Hanako's room is next door in the same hallway. Knocking lightly gets us no response, but the door proves to be unlocked. Lilly pauses for a moment as the handle unexpectedly moves under her hand, before opening the door."
-NARRATOR: "Hanako's room is startlingly bare and monotone. There are no decorations on the plain white walls, a plain dark blue blanket, and only a few books, papers, and purely utilitarian items on the shelves. Even her bedsheets are monochrome. The entire room feels as subdued as Hanako's character. Hanako herself is laying curled up on her bed. She may not be crying now, but her eyes are closed tightly to stop herself, and the tracks left by her tears still sit on her reddened cheeks.I quietly walk in and set her bag down on her desk, afraid of startling her too much."
+NARRATOR: "Hanako's room is startlingly bare and monotone. There are no decorations on the plain white walls, a plain dark blue blanket, and only a few books, papers, and purely utilitarian items on the shelves. Even her bedsheets are monochrome."
-<p style="text-align:center;">[[File:Hanako in her bed.png|700px]]</p>
+<p style="text-align:center;">[[File:hanako_cry_closed.jpg|700px]]</p>
+NARRATOR: "The entire room feels as subdued as Hanako's character. Hanako herself is laying curled up on her bed. She may not be crying now, but her eyes are closed tightly to stop herself, and the tracks left by her tears still sit on her reddened cheeks.I quietly walk in and set her bag down on her desk, afraid of startling her too much."
 LILLY: "Hello, Hanako. Hisao told me about what happened today... are you all right?"
+<p style="text-align:center;">[[File:hanako_cry_away.jpg|700px]]</p>
 NARRATOR: "Hanako's eyes open, though only a little."
 HANAKO: "I... I'm okay..."
+<p style="text-align:center;">[[File:hanako_cry_open.jpg|700px]]</p>
 NARRATOR: "She tilts her head slightly to look at me, noticing my grimacing before I can hide it."
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 LILLY: "I'm the one who should be sorry, Hanako."
+<p style="text-align:center;">[[File:hanako_cry_away.jpg|700px]]</p>
 NARRATOR: "Hanako's eyes open to peer at Lilly. She looks at Lilly for some time, taking in her face with those dark, analytical eyes of hers. Lilly must have made the right impression on her, as Hanako recovers enough to prop herself up on the bed and shift to sitting on its side. Hanako worries about many things, but troubling others is foremost among them. Hearing Hanako's shuffling, Lilly moves forward and feels out the side of the bed, eventually taking a seat beside her and taking Hanako's left hand in both of hers. The feeling of me being out of place when the two are together has lessened in the time that we've known each other, but it's still occasionally very much there. This is one of those times, I think."
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 [[Category:Act 3 Transcripts]]
 [[Category:Act 3 - Castling Transcripts]]
+[[Category:Hanako's route]]
+[[Category:Act 3]]