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HISAO: "Yeah, it's me."

NARRATOR: "I can hear the pitter-patter of footsteps coming to the door, followed by the sound of the lock snapping open. I don't think I've ever seen Lilly's door locked before, and it makes me a little suspicious. Once the door opens, the sight is... a little underwhelming for a birthday party. Hanako returns to her seat at the table with a quick smile and a nod, leaving me to close and, assuming they wanted it to be kept that way, lock the door. As I do so, I realize that the scene before me is that of an evening tea party, just like any other between the two. Somehow, I don't think I should be surprised. To my relief, Hanako looks relatively calm. The break from class has probably done her good, and given her time to wind down a bit."

NARRATOR: "I can hear the pitter-patter of footsteps coming to the door, followed by the sound of the lock snapping open. I don't think I've ever seen Lilly's door locked before, and it makes me a little suspicious. Once the door opens, the sight is... a little underwhelming for a birthday party."

[[File:lilly_bedroom.jpg|700px]]

NARRATOR: "Hanako returns to her seat at the table with a quick smile and a nod, leaving me to close and, assuming they wanted it to be kept that way, lock the door. As I do so, I realize that the scene before me is that of an evening tea party, just like any other between the two. Somehow, I don't think I should be surprised. To my relief, Hanako looks relatively calm. The break from class has probably done her good, and given her time to wind down a bit."

NARRATOR: "I take a seat between the two at the low table in the center of Lilly's room, the brightly-colored teapot steaming away between us. A tall brown bag close by Lilly's side catches my attention. I covertly try to glance inside it a couple of times, but can't get a good look from here. Looking to Hanako, it seems like she's as curious about it as I am."

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HANAKO: "I'll... make sure I'll play you first..."

[[File:~~Hanako with her presents~~.~~png~~|700px]]

[[File:hanako_presents2.jpg|700px]]

NARRATOR: "She takes the doll she received from Lilly and holds it to her chest together with the small chessboard, putting the piece on top. The act seems to settle her down somewhat, and we just sit in silence for a while. I think it's one of the few times I've seen her genuinely happy, cradling the friendship of two people to her chest as tightly as she can."

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HISAO: "Don't worry, I've got it..."

[[File:~~Lilly comforts Hanako~~.~~png~~|700px]]

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NARRATOR: "Lilly reaches sideways and gently takes the fussing Hanako in her arms, giving me pause."

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 HISAO: "Yeah, it's me."
-NARRATOR: "I can hear the pitter-patter of footsteps coming to the door, followed by the sound of the lock snapping open. I don't think I've ever seen Lilly's door locked before, and it makes me a little suspicious. Once the door opens, the sight is... a little underwhelming for a birthday party. Hanako returns to her seat at the table with a quick smile and a nod, leaving me to close and, assuming they wanted it to be kept that way, lock the door. As I do so, I realize that the scene before me is that of an evening tea party, just like any other between the two. Somehow, I don't think I should be surprised. To my relief, Hanako looks relatively calm. The break from class has probably done her good, and given her time to wind down a bit."
+NARRATOR: "I can hear the pitter-patter of footsteps coming to the door, followed by the sound of the lock snapping open. I don't think I've ever seen Lilly's door locked before, and it makes me a little suspicious. Once the door opens, the sight is... a little underwhelming for a birthday party."
+<p style="text-align:center;">[[File:lilly_bedroom.jpg|700px]]</p>
+NARRATOR: "Hanako returns to her seat at the table with a quick smile and a nod, leaving me to close and, assuming they wanted it to be kept that way, lock the door. As I do so, I realize that the scene before me is that of an evening tea party, just like any other between the two. Somehow, I don't think I should be surprised. To my relief, Hanako looks relatively calm. The break from class has probably done her good, and given her time to wind down a bit."
 NARRATOR: "I take a seat between the two at the low table in the center of Lilly's room, the brightly-colored teapot steaming away between us. A tall brown bag close by Lilly's side catches my attention. I covertly try to glance inside it a couple of times, but can't get a good look from here. Looking to Hanako, it seems like she's as curious about it as I am."
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 HANAKO: "I'll... make sure I'll play you first..."
-<p style="text-align:center;">[[File:Hanako with her presents.png|700px]]</p>
+<p style="text-align:center;">[[File:hanako_presents2.jpg|700px]]</p>
 NARRATOR: "She takes the doll she received from Lilly and holds it to her chest together with the small chessboard, putting the piece on top. The act seems to settle her down somewhat, and we just sit in silence for a while. I think it's one of the few times I've seen her genuinely happy, cradling the friendship of two people to her chest as tightly as she can."
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 HISAO: "Don't worry, I've got it..."
-<p style="text-align:center;">[[File:Lilly comforts Hanako.png|700px]]</p>
+<p style="text-align:center;">[[File:lilly_hanako_hug.jpg|700px]]</p>
 NARRATOR: "Lilly reaches sideways and gently takes the fussing Hanako in her arms, giving me pause."
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 [[Category:Act 3 Transcripts]]
 [[Category:Act 3 - Castling Transcripts]]
+[[Category:Hisao Scenes]]
+[[Category:Hanako's route]]
+[[Category:Act 3]]