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! | !Narration | ||
|''A light breeze causes the naked branches overhead to rattle like wooden windchimes.'' | |''A light breeze causes the naked branches overhead to rattle like wooden windchimes.'' | ||
''This is a popular retreat for couples in the summer. The deciduous trees provide a beautiful green canopy, far out of sight of teachers and fellow students.''<br> | ''This is a popular retreat for couples in the summer. The deciduous trees provide a beautiful green canopy, far out of sight of teachers and fellow students.''<br /> | ||
''But now, in late winter, it feels like I'm standing under a pile of kindling.''<br> | ''But now, in late winter, it feels like I'm standing under a pile of kindling.''<br /> | ||
''I breathe into my cupped hands and rub them together furiously to prevent them from numbing in this cold.'' | ''I breathe into my cupped hands and rub them together furiously to prevent them from numbing in this cold.'' | ||
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|Just how long am I expected to wait out here, anyway? I'm sure the note said 4:00 PM. | |Just how long am I expected to wait out here, anyway? I'm sure the note said 4:00 PM. | ||
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! | !Narration | ||
|''Ah yes... the note... slipped between the pages of my math book while I wasn't looking.''<br> | |''Ah yes... the note... slipped between the pages of my math book while I wasn't looking.''<br /> | ||
''As far as clichés go, I'm more a fan of the letter-in-the-locker, but at least this way shows a bit of initiative.''<br> | ''As far as clichés go, I'm more a fan of the letter-in-the-locker, but at least this way shows a bit of initiative.''<br /> | ||
''As I ponder the meaning of the note, the snowfall gradually thickens.''<br> | ''As I ponder the meaning of the note, the snowfall gradually thickens.''<br /> | ||
''The snowflakes silently falling from the white-painted sky are the only sign of time passing in this stagnant world.''<br> | ''The snowflakes silently falling from the white-painted sky are the only sign of time passing in this stagnant world.''<br /> | ||
''Their slow descent upon the frozen forest makes it seem like time has slowed to a crawl.''<br> | ''Their slow descent upon the frozen forest makes it seem like time has slowed to a crawl.''<br /> | ||
''The rustling of dry snow underfoot startles me, interrupting the quiet mood. Someone is approaching me from behind.'' | ''The rustling of dry snow underfoot startles me, interrupting the quiet mood. Someone is approaching me from behind.'' | ||
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|Hi... Hisao? You came? | |Hi... Hisao? You came? | ||
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! | !Narration | ||
|''A hesitating, barely audible question.''<br> | |''A hesitating, barely audible question.''<br /> | ||
''However, I recognize the owner of that dainty voice instantly.''<br> | ''However, I recognize the owner of that dainty voice instantly.''<br /> | ||
''I feel my heart skip a beat.''<br> | ''I feel my heart skip a beat.''<br /> | ||
''It's a voice I've listened to hundreds of times, but never as more than an eavesdropper to a conversation.''<br> | ''It's a voice I've listened to hundreds of times, but never as more than an eavesdropper to a conversation.''<br /> | ||
''I turn to face this voice, the voice of my dreams, and my heart begins to race...''<br> | ''I turn to face this voice, the voice of my dreams, and my heart begins to race...''<br /> | ||
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!Hisao | !Hisao | ||
|Iwanako? I got a note telling me to wait here... it was yours? | |Iwanako? I got a note telling me to wait here... it was yours? | ||
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! | !Narration | ||
|''Dammit. I spent all afternoon trying to come up with a good line and that was the result.''<br> | |''Dammit. I spent all afternoon trying to come up with a good line and that was the result.''<br /> | ||
''Pathetic.'' | ''Pathetic.'' | ||
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|Ahmm... yes. I asked a friend to give you that note... I'm so glad you got it. | |Ahmm... yes. I asked a friend to give you that note... I'm so glad you got it. | ||
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! | !Narration | ||
|''A shy, joyous smile that makes me so tense I couldn't move a single muscle even if I tried.''<br> | |''A shy, joyous smile that makes me so tense I couldn't move a single muscle even if I tried.''<br /> | ||
''My heart is pounding now, as if it were trying to burst out from my chest and claim this girl for itself.''<br> | ''My heart is pounding now, as if it were trying to burst out from my chest and claim this girl for itself.''<br /> | ||
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!Hisao | !Hisao | ||
|So... ah... here we are. Out in the cold... | |So... ah... here we are. Out in the cold... | ||
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! | !Narration | ||
|''Once again, the wind stirs up the branches. The cacophonous noise is music to my ears.''<br> | |''Once again, the wind stirs up the branches. The cacophonous noise is music to my ears.''<br /> | ||
''Iwanako flinches ever so softly against the gust of wind.''<br> | ''Iwanako flinches ever so softly against the gust of wind.''<br /> | ||
''As it passes, she rights herself, as if supported by some new confidence.''<br> | ''As it passes, she rights herself, as if supported by some new confidence.''<br /> | ||
''Her eyes lock with mine and she lazily twirls her long, dark hair around her finger.''<br> | ''Her eyes lock with mine and she lazily twirls her long, dark hair around her finger.''<br /> | ||
''All the while, the anxious beating of my heart grows louder.''<br> | ''All the while, the anxious beating of my heart grows louder.''<br /> | ||
''My throat is tight; I doubt I could even force a word out if I tried.''<br> | ''My throat is tight; I doubt I could even force a word out if I tried.''<br /> | ||
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!Iwanako | !Iwanako | ||
|You see...<br> | |You see...<br /> | ||
...I wanted to know...<br> | ...I wanted to know...<br /> | ||
...if you'd go out with me... | ...if you'd go out with me... | ||
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! | !Narration | ||
|''I stand there, motionless, save for my pounding heart.''<br> | |''I stand there, motionless, save for my pounding heart.''<br /> | ||
''I want to say something in reply, but my vocal cords feel like they've been stretched beyond the breaking point.'' | ''I want to say something in reply, but my vocal cords feel like they've been stretched beyond the breaking point.'' | ||
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|... Hisao? | |... Hisao? | ||
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|''I reach up to try to massage my throat, but this only sends spikes of blinding pain along my arms.'' | |''I reach up to try to massage my throat, but this only sends spikes of blinding pain along my arms.'' | ||
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|... Hisao?! | |... Hisao?! | ||
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! | !Narration | ||
|''My whole body freezes, save for my eyes, which shoot open in terror.'' | |''My whole body freezes, save for my eyes, which shoot open in terror.'' | ||
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|... HISAO! | |... HISAO! | ||
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|''The beating in my chest suddenly stops, and I go weak at the knees.''<br> | |''The beating in my chest suddenly stops, and I go weak at the knees.''<br /> | ||
''The world around me - the canopy of bare branches, the dull winter sky, Iwanako running towards me - all these fade to black.''<br> | ''The world around me - the canopy of bare branches, the dull winter sky, Iwanako running towards me - all these fade to black.''<br /> | ||
''The last things I remember before slipping away are the sounds of Iwanako screaming for help and the incessant clatter of the branches above...'' | ''The last things I remember before slipping away are the sounds of Iwanako screaming for help and the incessant clatter of the branches above...'' | ||
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Revision as of 16:30, 20 December 2016
| Narration | A light breeze causes the naked branches overhead to rattle like wooden windchimes.
This is a popular retreat for couples in the summer. The deciduous trees provide a beautiful green canopy, far out of sight of teachers and fellow students. |
|---|---|
| Hisao | Just how long am I expected to wait out here, anyway? I'm sure the note said 4:00 PM. |
| Narration | Ah yes... the note... slipped between the pages of my math book while I wasn't looking. As far as clichés go, I'm more a fan of the letter-in-the-locker, but at least this way shows a bit of initiative. |
| ??? | Hi... Hisao? You came? |
| Narration | A hesitating, barely audible question. However, I recognize the owner of that dainty voice instantly. |
| Hisao | Iwanako? I got a note telling me to wait here... it was yours? |
| Narration | Dammit. I spent all afternoon trying to come up with a good line and that was the result. Pathetic. |
| Iwanako | Ahmm... yes. I asked a friend to give you that note... I'm so glad you got it. |
| Narration | A shy, joyous smile that makes me so tense I couldn't move a single muscle even if I tried. My heart is pounding now, as if it were trying to burst out from my chest and claim this girl for itself. |
| Hisao | So... ah... here we are. Out in the cold... |
| Narration | Once again, the wind stirs up the branches. The cacophonous noise is music to my ears. Iwanako flinches ever so softly against the gust of wind. |
| Iwanako | You see... ...I wanted to know... |
| Narration | I stand there, motionless, save for my pounding heart. I want to say something in reply, but my vocal cords feel like they've been stretched beyond the breaking point. |
| Iwanako | ... Hisao? |
| Narration | I reach up to try to massage my throat, but this only sends spikes of blinding pain along my arms. |
| Iwanako | ... Hisao?! |
| Narration | My whole body freezes, save for my eyes, which shoot open in terror. |
| Iwanako | ... HISAO! |
| Narration | The beating in my chest suddenly stops, and I go weak at the knees. The world around me - the canopy of bare branches, the dull winter sky, Iwanako running towards me - all these fade to black. |
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