Out Cold/Transcript: Difference between revisions
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!Narration | !Narration | ||
|''A light breeze causes the naked branches overhead to rattle like wooden windchimes.'' | | | ||
''A light breeze causes the naked branches overhead to rattle like wooden windchimes.''<br /> | |||
''This is a popular retreat for couples in the summer. The deciduous trees provide a beautiful green canopy, far out of sight of teachers and fellow students.''<br /> | ''This is a popular retreat for couples in the summer. The deciduous trees provide a beautiful green canopy, far out of sight of teachers and fellow students.''<br /> | ||
''But now, in late winter, it feels like I'm standing under a pile of kindling.''<br /> | ''But now, in late winter, it feels like I'm standing under a pile of kindling.''<br /> | ||
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!Hisao | !Hisao | ||
|Just how long am I expected to wait out here, anyway? I'm sure the note said 4:00 PM. | | | ||
Just how long am I expected to wait out here, anyway? I'm sure the note said 4:00 PM. | |||
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|''Ah yes... the note... slipped between the pages of my math book while I wasn't looking.''<br /> | | | ||
''Ah yes... the note... slipped between the pages of my math book while I wasn't looking.''<br /> | |||
''As far as clichés go, I'm more a fan of the letter-in-the-locker, but at least this way shows a bit of initiative.''<br /> | ''As far as clichés go, I'm more a fan of the letter-in-the-locker, but at least this way shows a bit of initiative.''<br /> | ||
''As I ponder the meaning of the note, the snowfall gradually thickens.''<br /> | ''As I ponder the meaning of the note, the snowfall gradually thickens.''<br /> | ||
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|Hi... Hisao? You came? | | | ||
Hi... Hisao? You came? | |||
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|''A hesitating, barely audible question.''<br /> | | | ||
''A hesitating, barely audible question.''<br /> | |||
''However, I recognize the owner of that dainty voice instantly.''<br /> | ''However, I recognize the owner of that dainty voice instantly.''<br /> | ||
''I feel my heart skip a beat.''<br /> | ''I feel my heart skip a beat.''<br /> | ||
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!Hisao | !Hisao | ||
|Iwanako? I got a note telling me to wait here... it was yours? | | | ||
Iwanako? I got a note telling me to wait here... it was yours? | |||
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|''Dammit. I spent all afternoon trying to come up with a good line and that was the result.''<br /> | | | ||
''Dammit. I spent all afternoon trying to come up with a good line and that was the result.''<br /> | |||
''Pathetic.'' | ''Pathetic.'' | ||
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!Iwanako | !Iwanako | ||
|Ahmm... yes. I asked a friend to give you that note... I'm so glad you got it. | | | ||
Ahmm... yes. I asked a friend to give you that note... I'm so glad you got it. | |||
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|''A shy, joyous smile that makes me so tense I couldn't move a single muscle even if I tried.''<br /> | | | ||
''A shy, joyous smile that makes me so tense I couldn't move a single muscle even if I tried.''<br /> | |||
''My heart is pounding now, as if it were trying to burst out from my chest and claim this girl for itself.''<br /> | ''My heart is pounding now, as if it were trying to burst out from my chest and claim this girl for itself.''<br /> | ||
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!Hisao | !Hisao | ||
|So... ah... here we are. Out in the cold... | | | ||
So... ah... here we are. Out in the cold... | |||
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!Narration | !Narration | ||
|''Once again, the wind stirs up the branches. The cacophonous noise is music to my ears.'' | | | ||
''Once again, the wind stirs up the branches. The cacophonous noise is music to my ears.'' | |||
''Iwanako flinches ever so softly against the gust of wind.''<br /> | ''Iwanako flinches ever so softly against the gust of wind.''<br /> | ||
''As it passes, she rights herself, as if supported by some new confidence.''<br /> | ''As it passes, she rights herself, as if supported by some new confidence.''<br /> | ||
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!Iwanako | !Iwanako | ||
|You see...<br /> | | | ||
You see...<br /> | |||
...I wanted to know...<br /> | ...I wanted to know...<br /> | ||
...if you'd go out with me... | ...if you'd go out with me... | ||
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!Narration | !Narration | ||
|''I stand there, motionless, save for my pounding heart.''<br /> | | | ||
''I stand there, motionless, save for my pounding heart.''<br /> | |||
''I want to say something in reply, but my vocal cords feel like they've been stretched beyond the breaking point.'' | ''I want to say something in reply, but my vocal cords feel like they've been stretched beyond the breaking point.'' | ||
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!Iwanako | !Iwanako | ||
|... Hisao? | | | ||
... Hisao? | |||
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!Narration | !Narration | ||
|''I reach up to try to massage my throat, but this only sends spikes of blinding pain along my arms.'' | | | ||
''I reach up to try to massage my throat, but this only sends spikes of blinding pain along my arms.'' | |||
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!Iwanako | !Iwanako | ||
|... Hisao?! | | | ||
... Hisao?! | |||
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!Narration | !Narration | ||
|''My whole body freezes, save for my eyes, which shoot open in terror.'' | | | ||
''My whole body freezes, save for my eyes, which shoot open in terror.'' | |||
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!Iwanako | !Iwanako | ||
|... HISAO! | | | ||
... HISAO! | |||
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!Narration | !Narration | ||
|''The beating in my chest suddenly stops, and I go weak at the knees.''<br /> | | | ||
''The beating in my chest suddenly stops, and I go weak at the knees.''<br /> | |||
''The world around me - the canopy of bare branches, the dull winter sky, Iwanako running towards me - all these fade to black.''<br /> | ''The world around me - the canopy of bare branches, the dull winter sky, Iwanako running towards me - all these fade to black.''<br /> | ||
''The last things I remember before slipping away are the sounds of Iwanako screaming for help and the incessant clatter of the branches above...'' | ''The last things I remember before slipping away are the sounds of Iwanako screaming for help and the incessant clatter of the branches above...'' | ||